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A story for my upcoming collection, titled after this story, "The Edge". Feel free to critique the hell out of it. It probably needs it. I hate the formatting limitations that DA leaves us with, but I think I did the best I could with the limited text and html coding they provide us with.
I'd love your feedback. How could I have done better? What did you think of Tomas? What did you think of the first person narrative/journal switch off. I've always had issues with that.
Was it tense at all? Find any errors? Let me know. I don't bite. My fiancé won't let me. She took away my custom made fangs. She says I can only use them on her... Women.
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